Something of a variety show... minus the host, music, magic, ventriloquist, and show parts.
nice...this is tight and in a few words evokes much...nicely done.
very well written...love this!
I love this - even more powerful for its brevity.
Brief, but potently writ...an interesting image, that set me thinking. Brings new meaning to the old phrase "It all comes full circle"...so it is with the pain of a broken heart.
I feel this. Great write hun, brave and unadulterated
Nice short poem here.I like it!
Thank you, all. Thank you!
makes me think that lines and people may be incomplete without knowing pain that connects one, literally. Well done.
great images constructed with few words...bkm
OUCH!!! Tight one, JRM!! And yet, too perfect for words!!
Solid imagery, taut execution, exemplary line breaks.
I am going to use this in a yoga class. giving credit to my poetic friend, of course. thank you for sharing your heart.
nice...this is tight and in a few words evokes much...nicely done.
ReplyDeletevery well written...love this!
ReplyDeleteI love this - even more powerful for its brevity.
ReplyDeleteBrief, but potently writ...an interesting image, that set me thinking. Brings new meaning to the old phrase "It all comes full circle"...so it is with the pain of a broken heart.
ReplyDeleteI feel this. Great write hun, brave and unadulterated
ReplyDeleteNice short poem here.
ReplyDeleteI like it!
Thank you, all. Thank you!
ReplyDeletemakes me think that lines and people may be incomplete without knowing pain that connects one, literally. Well done.
ReplyDeletegreat images constructed with few words...bkm
ReplyDeleteOUCH!!! Tight one, JRM!! And yet, too perfect for words!!
ReplyDeleteSolid imagery, taut execution, exemplary line breaks.
ReplyDeleteI am going to use this in a yoga class. giving credit to my poetic friend, of course. thank you for sharing your heart.
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