Standing in line
Minding my own business
I patiently await my turn
My head is down
Fresh from magazine stand
I’m thumbing from page to page
I hear a sound
My head picks up
Just some change hitting the floor
I’m up next
After those in front of me
How much longer will I wait?
The day is young
But I have things to do
So my patience begins to fade
When out of the blue
As she turns to walk out
She brushes against my arm
I catch a glimpse
Lock with her eyes
I turn around, curiously staring
With a quick turn back
She proceeds out the door
Now I’m the one holding the line
*Note: Inspired by Theme Thursday, topic: Brush
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Oh yea, that was really good, I was right there in the line!
ReplyDeleteha. i was right there in line as well...so did you stay in line or follow? smiles. happy theme thursday!
ReplyDeletei love those moments, when you get a jolt into feeling something intense.
ReplyDeletenice TT magic!
hate waiting in lines. happy tt
ReplyDeleteHate those lines. So...did you break out of line or stay and wonder 'what if' ? :)
ReplyDeleteIt doesn't happen often, does it ... that sense of deep connection. When it does it is often without sound and without touch. Just a fleeting connection and then ... nothingness.
ReplyDeleteWhat a clever TT. A lot can be transmitted through just a brush and a quick eye contact. BUT, I would have trouble leaving a line I had spent much time in just to chase a possibility. Some would. :)
ReplyDeleteMy TT will be up this evening.
PG
Hey you, Lover boy, some of us are waiting here! j/k. Very sweet, very nice.
ReplyDeleteNice, nice TT!!
ReplyDelete:)
nice TT :D did u stay in line, or go after her? :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, all, for the great comments!
ReplyDeleteI probably would have left the line and followed.
ReplyDeleteReads like a song
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