Tuesday, July 27, 2010

Sometimes simple…

…is the best way;
I love you
I want you
I miss you
…is all we should say.



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23 comments:

  1. A. RobinJuly 27, 2010 at 3:20 PM

    So true! Sometimes three little words are enough (that tends to be my downfall).

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  2. signed...bkmJuly 27, 2010 at 3:42 PM

    Most of the time it is the best way...bravo..bkm

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  3. Kira StannJuly 27, 2010 at 3:50 PM

    Simplicity is what is needed to unravel the complexities of the day. I love this poem!

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  4. dustusJuly 27, 2010 at 3:58 PM

    Very true... and so quickly forgotten it can seem sometimes. thanks. Well written.

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  5. Brian MillerJuly 27, 2010 at 4:25 PM

    brilliant in its simple complexity...nicely done. thanks for linking up to oneshot again!

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  6. MoryJuly 27, 2010 at 5:01 PM

    from my experience these do not suffice most time. nicely done. i am a simplistic but unfortunately the world isn't.

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  7. moondustwriterJuly 27, 2010 at 5:06 PM

    I agree wholeheartedly. simple and sweet!!!

    So glad you were here for One Shot Wednesday

    Smiles from the Moon

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  8. UnknownJuly 27, 2010 at 5:26 PM

    So true and so charmingly put

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  9. CorbieJuly 27, 2010 at 5:34 PM

    So simple yet so profoundly beautiful. Great job!

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  10. AnonymousJuly 27, 2010 at 5:59 PM

    Excellent this is such a lovely thought with depth! Nicely done!

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  11. Desert RoseJuly 27, 2010 at 6:46 PM

    couldn't agree more..simple and to the heart..:) beautiful!

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  12. AmandaJuly 27, 2010 at 7:30 PM

    This is such powerful words with so much meaning and depth. Wonderful and thanks for sharing ~ Amanda

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  13. Ben LanghinrichsJuly 27, 2010 at 8:21 PM

    Nicely written. Sometimes simplicity is best.

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  14. PattiKenJuly 27, 2010 at 10:31 PM

    So much wisdom in so few words. Nicely done.

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  15. TALONJuly 27, 2010 at 11:02 PM

    Little things (including words) say a whole lot. Loved this!

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  16. John (@bookdreamer)July 28, 2010 at 3:29 AM

    The rule of teaching - say what you are going to say, say it and then say what you've said always applies to saying I love you. I do poetry for fun rather than publication so for this week only, I’ve nervously posted an example from each of my blogs: an Elegy from Scribbles and Diversions, a Gogyohka from Random Twitter Stories, and free verse poem from Random Short Stories.

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  17. AnonymousJuly 28, 2010 at 5:41 AM

    I quite agree with the sentiment, JRM. Simplicity itself, and all the more elegant for it. :)

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  18. JessieJuly 28, 2010 at 6:48 AM

    simplicity is always the answer
    especially when dealing with the heart.

    smiles,

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  19. ClaudiaJuly 28, 2010 at 10:52 AM

    yep - in lots of cases this few words would be enough..

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  20. joannaJuly 28, 2010 at 5:37 PM

    and thank you ....

    Lest we forget to just be simple and child like and express our feelings with straight forward simplicity and honesty.

    Lovely,
    Joanny

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  21. AnonymousJuly 29, 2010 at 3:52 AM

    nice :) short and sweet !

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  22. MarshyAugust 1, 2010 at 2:18 PM

    less is more and is this case so very, very, much more....been away for a week so catching up and cheers for being part of one shot..Pete

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  23. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 14, 2011 at 1:20 PM

    short and powerful.

    Thanks for sharing.
    Happy V Day.
    A++

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